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A hurriedly scribbled verse, choice of words both

A hurriedly scribbled verse, 
choice of words bothers, 
or maybe the phrases 
I didn't dare use, 
comma or semicolon, 
which is more appropriate? 
lines that don't talk back to me, 
that constant struggle, 
strange numbness, 
which cannot explain
what is wrong, 
only sure that something is,
makes me wonder, 
is it the verse 
or my life that it represents
the cause of mental colic? 
should I just erase 
the words or the pause that pervades?

Life is passing by, 
while I lie waiting 
for the perfect word 
to describe love and other afflictions. 









     #verse #love #life #YoPoWriMo #yqbaba
A hurriedly scribbled verse, 
choice of words bothers, 
or maybe the phrases 
I didn't dare use, 
comma or semicolon, 
which is more appropriate? 
lines that don't talk back to me, 
that constant struggle, 
strange numbness, 
which cannot explain
what is wrong, 
only sure that something is,
makes me wonder, 
is it the verse 
or my life that it represents
the cause of mental colic? 
should I just erase 
the words or the pause that pervades?

Life is passing by, 
while I lie waiting 
for the perfect word 
to describe love and other afflictions. 









     #verse #love #life #YoPoWriMo #yqbaba
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Amit Jotwani

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