The story was muted by a plucky sentence. It wanted 'her' freedom. The story relented. 'She' excelled at the end. Participate in the #rapidfire and come up with your #20wordfreedomstory. In a story, each line needs to advance action or reveal character. My favourite entries posted before 10 pm IST will be highlighted tomorrow. #YourQuoteAndMine Collaborating with YourQuote Baba
