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A seduction in metaphor and rhyme, my verse attemp

A seduction
in metaphor
and rhyme,
my verse
attempts
with every line,
even working on
the barren spaces
between,
so that they reflect
my eager ardour
and a desire keen, 
like a pregnant cloud 
on the verge of a burst, 
will love take the podium 
or will lust get there first? 

Either way, 
Did I crack the code?  #metaphor #rhyme #seduction #love #lust #yopowrimo18 #yqbaba
A seduction
in metaphor
and rhyme,
my verse
attempts
with every line,
even working on
the barren spaces
between,
so that they reflect
my eager ardour
and a desire keen, 
like a pregnant cloud 
on the verge of a burst, 
will love take the podium 
or will lust get there first? 

Either way, 
Did I crack the code?  #metaphor #rhyme #seduction #love #lust #yopowrimo18 #yqbaba
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Amit Jotwani

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