Khamoshi ki iss raat m Ek apna sa khab bunti hun Kya h meri manzil btado Jisme aage badhna h wo samjhado Dafn kr di h apni khwaishein toh Ab krni h puri bss tumhari hidayatein #bandishein #newlearner #thirdpoem you can tell me in the comments section what can i improve in this...