Was chatting with a reader friend of mine yesternight on Instagram and we somehow steered into talking about my writing. She more or less both complimented AND complained about my stories being so much filled with minute details that she often had to actually research the work I'd chosen and read the prose extra carefully to make sure she hadn't missed any detail as the scene got built into her head. So, I wrote this little impromptu passage for her, highlighting the fact it's always the details that make the story better.
What do you think?
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