ICU bed, cold steel, air conditioned antiseptic feel. Visual display, feeble curve, saline drip, replacing verve. Flesh weak, but mind alert back in time, memories revert. Navigating a flashback hike, pulse races, lusty spike. Reality returns, to impose curbs on dreams, comatose. #comatosedreams #ICUmemories #yqbaba

#comatosedreams #icumemories #yqbaba

ICU bed, cold steel, air conditioned antiseptic feel. Visual display, feeble curve, saline drip, replacing verve. Flesh weak, but mind alert back in time, memories revert. Navigating a flashback hike, pulse races, lusty spike. Reality returns, to impose curbs on dreams, comatose. #comatosedreams #ICUmemories #yqbaba

Amit Jotwani

Keep your periscope of undiluted hope always unsubmerged, for the tide may be turning for comatose dreams. #ComatoseDreams #periscope #hope #YoPoWriMo #yqbaba

#comatosedreams #periscope #Hope #yopowrimo #yqbaba

Keep your periscope
of undiluted hope
always unsubmerged,
for the tide may be turning
for comatose dreams. #ComatoseDreams #periscope #hope #YoPoWriMo #yqbaba

Amit Jotwani

A naked riverbed, dry & jaded, flaunting fossils of life that once flowed & ruled the robust waters with the abandon of an uncalibrated childhood. Ambushed by the unchecked silt of warped wisdom. Ultimately, we all become comatose rivers, barely breathing, flirting with relevance #life #ComatoseRivers #relevance #WarpedWisdom #YoPoWriMo #yqbaba

life #ComatoseRivers #relevance #WarpedWisdom #yopowrimo #yqbaba

A naked riverbed,
dry & jaded,
flaunting fossils of life
that once flowed & ruled
the robust waters
with the abandon
of an uncalibrated childhood.

Ambushed
by the unchecked silt
of warped wisdom.

Ultimately,
we all become comatose rivers,
barely breathing,
flirting with relevance #life #ComatoseRivers #relevance #WarpedWisdom #YoPoWriMo #yqbaba

Amit Jotwani

The steel of your tongue, slices through my unmetalled heart; keen edge, blunting my insignificant resistance; my essential essence, already resigned to a comatose existence. #steel #comatose #keenedge #heart #YoPoWriMo #yqbaba

#Steel #Comatose #keenedge #Heart #yopowrimo #yqbaba

The steel of your tongue,
slices through
my unmetalled heart;
keen edge,
blunting my insignificant resistance;
my essential essence,
already resigned
to a comatose existence. #steel #comatose #keenedge #heart #YoPoWriMo #yqbaba

Amit Jotwani

Infected by the syringe of separation, the saline drip of your memories rendered ineffective, my comatose dreams seek to borrow life from the tincture of your essence. #separation #ComatoseDreams #memories #SalineDrip #tincture #essence #yopowrimo18 #yqbaba

#separation #comatosedreams #Memories #SalineDrip #tincture #essence #yopowrimo18 #yqbaba

Infected
by the syringe of separation,
the saline drip of your memories
rendered ineffective,
my comatose dreams
seek to borrow life
from the tincture
of your essence.

#separation #ComatoseDreams #memories #SalineDrip #tincture #essence #yopowrimo18 #yqbaba

Amit Jotwani

The piercing shrieks of my dreams, audible remnants of an unforgiving past; wake me up in a cold sweat, turn comatose whispers, of my unfulfilled present. #dreams #shriek #unforgiving #comatose #whispers #unfulfilled #YoPoWriMo #yqbaba

#Dreams #Shriek #Unforgiving #Comatose #Whispers #unfulfilled #yopowrimo #yqbaba

The piercing shrieks of my dreams, audible remnants of an unforgiving past; wake me up in a cold sweat, turn comatose whispers, of my unfulfilled present. #dreams #shriek #unforgiving #comatose #whispers #unfulfilled #YoPoWriMo #yqbaba

Amit Jotwani

Cyanide in his thoughtstream permeating inanimate ink, provoking his son to ask 'Papa, is hope dead? ' ' No son, just comatose!' #cyanide #thoughtstream #ink #permeate #hope #dead #comatose #YoPoWriMo #yqbaba

#Cyanide #thoughtstream #ink #Permeate #Hope #dead #Comatose #yopowrimo #yqbaba

Cyanide in his thoughtstream
permeating inanimate ink,
provoking his son to ask
'Papa, is hope dead? '
' No son, just comatose!'

#cyanide #thoughtstream #ink #permeate #hope #dead #comatose #YoPoWriMo #yqbaba

Chitra Iyer

Lying comatose for years, death was a mere formality for him She watched him die, whilst she continued dying a million deaths in one life He lost her to life before she lost him to death She reincarnated in this very birth by finding a new life He was waiting to reincarnate in the other realm Some may experience many lifetimes in one life Some wait for a lifetime to experience life. Life of a comatose patient lying comatose for years and his youthful patient other half who finds a new cotraveler in her life #chitslife

Life of a comatose patient lying comatose for years and his youthful patient other half who finds a new cotraveler in her life #chitslife #yqbaba

Lying comatose for years, death was a mere formality for him
She watched him die, whilst she continued dying a million deaths in one life
He lost her to life before she lost him to death
She reincarnated in this very birth by finding a new life
He was waiting to reincarnate in the other realm
Some may experience many lifetimes in one life
Some wait for a lifetime to experience life. Life of a comatose patient lying comatose for years and his youthful patient other half who finds a new cotraveler in her life

#chitslife

Amit Jotwani

Relentless pace of a mentally demonetised life, diminishing relevance of comatose spirits almost reveling in mediocrity, swimming in a morass, a sign of ignorant resignation disguised as immunity. #RelentlessPace #demonitise #life #comatose #spirit #relevance #ignorant #immunity #YoPoWriMo #yqbaba

#RelentlessPace #demonitise life #Comatose #spirit #relevance #Ignorant #Immunity #yopowrimo #yqbaba

Relentless pace
of a mentally demonetised life,
diminishing relevance of comatose spirits
almost reveling in mediocrity,
swimming in a morass,
a sign of ignorant resignation
disguised as immunity.

#RelentlessPace #demonitise #life #comatose #spirit #relevance #ignorant #immunity #YoPoWriMo #yqbaba

Chitra Iyer

'𝚆𝚑𝚎𝚗 𝙸 𝚕𝚎𝚝 𝚢𝚘𝚞 𝚐𝚘' #wcletgo Five torturous months of swallowing grief by the gallons, choking on it watching my happy world lie miserably inert in the ICU ca

#wcletgo Five torturous months of swallowing grief by the gallons, choking on it watching my happy world lie miserably inert in the ICU ca #yqbaba #chitspain

'𝚆𝚑𝚎𝚗 𝙸 𝚕𝚎𝚝 𝚢𝚘𝚞 𝚐𝚘' #wcletgo

Five torturous months
of swallowing grief by the gallons,
choking on it
watching my happy world lie miserably inert in the ICU
ca

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